Found this little piece. It’s only short (as is the story), but it’s nice to read some positive feedback in any case!
For anyone interested the relevant work can be found here.
Courtesy of UndiscoveredTomes.blogspot.co.uk:
Everything within this story needed to be there: Every thought, every action, every word. The writing was exceptional. There was no flowery language, no extra narration. The writing was strong.
Even the dedication at the end fit well. It hit me like a truck, which could only happen with a powerful story.
If you read none of the others on this list, read this one.